The snow is As bright as- the sun on a hot summers day
The trees are As tall as- a skyscraper
The snow is As cold as- a big iceberg
The trees are- bent over so much
I am as-small as a mouse compared to the humongous trees around me
The snow is- going crunch crunch whenever i take a step and the snow is freezing so much
Im freezing and cold i feel like i'm in a ice cube brrrr i wish i could be at the beach playing on the hot hot sand and playing in the sea and swimming around with all the fish but i'm not.Instead i'm in the cold snow and it feels like i'm in Antarctica and its just too cold here i want to go home but i can't because i am here i hate the cold brrrr.The cold is bad you can get sick from the cold that's why i hate the cold and you should to i HATE THE COLD …………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
Hi Emma that is good work and i hate the cold to but i do like playing in the snow .
ReplyDeletegood job From Autumn