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Thursday, 21 May 2015

Dear Dairy Writing

Dear Dairy

     life in the trenches



 In the trenches its wet and cold and i can hair the guns shooting above me i am terrified

i jumped out of trenches and started to fight the foe as i fight i am listening to the guns going 

BANG BOOM POW and i am even more terrified and i hope i will survive everyone is geting killed around 

me and my best friend Gorge are the only ones left in our team beacause everyone else got killed by the foe

also the water is blue and the birds  are wisilling in the sky and i will be on my way home an less i die and

the trenches are muddy and there fly infested and rat infested i hope i will be home soon but until then i must

fight the foe wile lisnig to the larks singing in the dark blue sky as the guns go off below and im

coming home very soon but if i die i will not retern because ill be dead

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