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Thursday 19 March 2015

MY POEM ABOUT YELLOW

THE  COLOUR   YELLOW

yellow is the  sound  of   the   yellow   leaves   falling   off     the   trees in   Autumn 

yellow  is  the  fell  of    happiness   

Yellow is the taste  of   a   pineapple  ice  block

yellow is the taste of a banana  flavoured  fruit burst

yellow is  the sound  of a baby chick chirping

yellow  is the  feel of  a  banana  skin  on the  ground 

yellow  is  colour of a flower in the middle of the feild

yellow is the colour of a book in a big big library. 

5 comments:

  1. Hi Emma make sure you skim read and edit your writing on your blog before publishing because the y's have to be capitals at the start of a new line,but i really loved your writing! Keep up the great work Emma!

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    1. THANKS BUT I FOR GOT SO I DID NOT PUT CAPITALS
      BUT NEXT TIME I WILL PUT CAPS OK

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  2. HI Emma cool writing I really like how you put the words into colours and put the title in capitals Awesome Emma!!!

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  3. you make me want it to be Autumn and the pineapple iceblock

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  4. HI Emma.
    I like your poem and I can see you have put my name in your poem. I love it.
    To Emma. and I love your poem.
    From Autumn.

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